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      The tingly feeling stated one week before I fainted. It started in Quick-Mart on Saturday. Where it came from, I don't know. But much later on I found out. I had just broken up with my boyfriend of 10 months, and I was still upset. but when I stepped away from the Deli that day, I got dizzy and I started smelling fruits and flowers out of nowhere. I was so confused at that point. I also had this funny feeling like someone was watching me. And there he was, standing on the other side of the market, but I didn't know it at all. My mum called me from afar and I ran to meet her. I had just turned 18 and got my license for a year now. My mum had sprained her right ankle and couldn't drive with her left foot, so I drove. As I was driving home on the wet, leafy roads, I pondered what those feelings were and what they meant. I just couldn't figured it out. It was really bothering me. Then I go this terrible headache that came out of thin air. It felt as though the ache was coming from my heart and my mind. Then that night the nightmares came, of some boy dying and me not being able to save him. Also of never finding my love, which was really strange, because I didn't really care whether or not I did; though in the dream, my head felt differently about it. These disturbing feelings and nightmares stayed with me until Monday at school, when the tingly ones came back.

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I remember it all very well, like the back of my hand. That day when he came to save me. He is kind of like me in a way and he saved me because he had to. And there he is, on his back, when someone is pulling me away from his bloody body, looking at me with pained eyes. I try to reach him, I pull and pull. I run, but I think it's too late. And now I can't even save him.

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Hey, new story coming up!!           No title and I'm still building up on the characters! Not all people have a title for the story as soon as they start... like I don't. Some people don't add it until the very end... I'm excited!!   Hope you like it, and maybe you can help me pick out a title too :)